The top piece of art is composed of directional lines and I like how the evenly spaced lines create a nice rhythm with how they go up and down in height (which reminds me of music volume beats).
Your expressive line drawing on the bottom has good movement with the eye being drawn from the top-left side of the paper around through the center and downward to the right side. I think the vertical lines in the paper separate the right designs too much.
The top piece of art is composed of directional lines and I like how the evenly spaced lines create a nice rhythm with how they go up and down in height (which reminds me of music volume beats).
ReplyDeleteYour expressive line drawing on the bottom has good movement with the eye being drawn from the top-left side of the paper around through the center and downward to the right side. I think the vertical lines in the paper separate the right designs too much.
I like they eyeball but the different designs seem a bit too disconnected. Perhaps if they were closer together or they had a common characteristic.
ReplyDeleteyour art work is good enough to me
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